wrinkle and feeble old man
not what he'll become
©Copyright Ginny Brannan March 2011
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| Artist: Paul Wright, U.K. |
Senryu (also called human haiku) is an unrhymed Japanese verse consisting of three unrhymed lines of 5,7,5 or 17 syllables. Senryu is usually written in present tense and only refers to some aspect of human nature or emotions.
Shared One Stop Poetry, One Shot Wednesday Week #47
oh but fate will find him...and he will learn...and maybe get a little wiser...smiles.
ReplyDeletefunny how perspectives change. great picture, too.
ReplyDeleteA beautiful Senryu lesson
ReplyDeleteWell said!
ReplyDeleteOh and by the time that lesson is learned...! So much truth in seventeen syllables. Bravo!!!
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