Watch as your writing
peels layers one by one,
revealing your true self
from who you’ve become.
Words full of passion,
the twist of the rhyme,
perfected ideas
flow from your mind.
Showing in excerpts
places you’ve been,
snapshots of life,
things you have seen.
Ideas are flowing...
you finish, and then--
back go the layers,
disguised once again.
© Copyright Ginny Brannan
Sharing at One Stop Poetry One Shot Wednesday 4/20/2011
© Copyright Ginny Brannan
Sharing at One Stop Poetry One Shot Wednesday 4/20/2011
nice...that is me to a T...each one gives away a little slice...
ReplyDeletebrill thanks for letting us read it
ReplyDeleteCan't create without revealing yourself. like the opening and closing aspect of this. Vb
ReplyDeleteHow did you know I am a woman of many disguises?? :)
ReplyDeleteExcellent poem!
I like how you end this:
ReplyDelete"...and then--
back go the layers,
disguised once again."
I don't think we ever understand the extent of all our layers. Well said!
violet
I love this, so true! Stop in & read One Shot
ReplyDeleteReally like this one Ginny, glad you shared it here.
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