where nature’s beauty shall prevail;
a single step and we begin...
serenity abides within
the crisp, clean air we now inhale.
We walk beside abandoned rail,
can hear the ghost train whistles wail--
then path leads back to woods again…
Come walk with me.
We live our lives in urban jail,
away from quiet wooded dale.
To stay entrapped would be a sin
when nature beckons with her grin,
and lifts the gray and smog filled veil--
Come walk with me.
From www.desktopscenes.com "Muir Woods" |
One Shot Poetry Wednesday Week #44 ~ 05/03/2011
Sharing at Gooseberry Garden, Week 10, Theme: Nature
wonderful...i am a mountain man...put me in the woods anyday but i do like my urban forays....
ReplyDeleteBeautiful...I'll come walk with you... : )
ReplyDeletethis poem is beautiful & peaceful like a nice walk.. love it!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful and serene.
ReplyDeleteGinny~
ReplyDeleteYou did the form proud. Excellent write, and the message is lovely.
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I love that forest air. The picture is clear in your poem. Good work!
ReplyDeleteI don't mind peaceful walks, but as soon as the creepy crawlies & biters awake, I'm off. Guess I've become too used to smog city life!
ReplyDeleteNice write all the same.
A lovely rondeau that reminds of the necessary serenity nature provides for ones enjoyment and recuperation.
ReplyDeletebeautiful, vivid imagery of nature:) thanks for sharing
ReplyDeleteA wonderful, peaceful write. I thoroughly enjoyed this one!
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love it,
ReplyDeletewalking in the woods or mountain trails is a lovely getaway.
thanks for the beautiful tour.
a lovely invitation.... and nice form too ~
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