From the inside-out, the inner poet escapes, needing to express....
just pick a corner and start...smiles...old houses have such personality....always a work in progress just like us...
A postive take on a dreary picture. I like that.
The nightmare of doing up an old building...
Oh my goodness, yes! So much to do and where to begin?
The room shows faded glory you are going to recapture. Goody.
A metaphor for my life I think---I so often feel this
Exactly! Metaphor for mine too, if you note the tags I put on the poem.
i want to be a person who likes old houses but i simply do not. The only thing i would to an old house is slowly replace all its parts with new
Beautiful ... I love your senryu poetry.
...we like the aged sofa finding the perfect spot in this big room of life where we can be rightfully appreciated by the many eyes that come and go...a truly a lifetime work in progress to find your real niche... lovely write.
very very good...than ks for sharing this
A work in progress...just like life...
Always a puzzler deciding that starter move! Nice to know someone was keen! ☺
Thank you for reading my poetry and sharing your thoughts.
just pick a corner and start...smiles...old houses have such personality....always a work in progress just like us...
ReplyDeleteA postive take on a dreary picture. I like that.
ReplyDeleteThe nightmare of doing up an old building...
ReplyDeleteOh my goodness, yes! So much to do and where to begin?
ReplyDeleteThe room shows faded glory you are going to recapture. Goody.
ReplyDeleteA metaphor for my life I think---I so often feel this
ReplyDeleteExactly! Metaphor for mine too, if you note the tags I put on the poem.
Deletei want to be a person who likes old houses but i simply do not. The only thing i would to an old house is slowly replace all its parts with new
ReplyDeleteBeautiful ... I love your senryu poetry.
ReplyDelete...we like the aged sofa finding the perfect spot in this big room of life where we can be rightfully appreciated by the many eyes that come and go...a truly a lifetime work in progress to find your real niche... lovely write.
ReplyDeletevery very good...than ks for sharing this
ReplyDeleteA work in progress...just like life...
ReplyDeleteAlways a puzzler deciding that starter move! Nice to know someone was keen! ☺
ReplyDelete