You’ve interjected that use of “slant rhyme”
is just excuse for those who “can’t rhyme”’
yet I will disagree
for I like subtlety
it pleases me more than your “rant” rhyme
While you say that tight rhyme is the best
and so clearly you’ve voiced your protest
the way that I see it
both are exquisite
a choice that the writer elects.
Poets Dickinson, Shakespeare and Yeats
who have rose to the realm of the greats
in their words we will find
a choice of slant rhyme
and that is but just a small taste
I truly mean no disrespect
yet please, if I may interject
that tight rhyme of course
is just fine if not forced
I prefer my own rhyme less direct.
© Ginny Brannan 2022
I follow a prolific writer of limericks in another state, who has the fine ability to share humor, politics, and daily life all in the format of a 5 line limerick. I am no Limerick writer, but I came across one of her recent limericks that had strong opinion on exact rhyme vs. slant, in part saying using slant "just means that you can't rhyme". I have my own strong opinions on this, so here is my reply. Perhaps you can find the slant rhymes that I've interspersed in it.
For those who wonder what slant is, it is a more subtle form of rhyme that sounds like a word but is not exact, ie one of the more famous, Emily Dickinson's "Hope", the slant here is "soul" and "all." Not exact rhyme, but I can't imagine a more perfect poem!
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