Sometimes the
woulda
coulda
shouldas
the
what ifs
and
the maybes
are left to dangle
as sentence awaits
one final punctuation.
© Ginny Brannan
2013
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smiles....cool...i like the form, the open space you give this to breath...and sometimes i think the life sentence is waiting for us to find our verb as well...
ReplyDeleteI love it. Life and grammar, hand-in-hand. Clever, Ginny.
ReplyDeleteLove this Ginny--and so true!
ReplyDeleteLove this Ginny. Thank you for your kind words and my thoughts will be with you in July. So sad about your mom, I am sorry.
ReplyDelete...interesting Ginny... i hope the sentence gets the right punctuation it deserves to justify its essence & intentions... smiles...
ReplyDeleteLovely! I appreciate you reminding us that structure can play a beautiful part is a poem's ascetics. Again, lovely Ginny my friend.
ReplyDeleteah...the woulda
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shouldas.... def. they need that final period to be finally quiet...neatly penned ginny..
Life is so full of those woulda coulda shouldas and whatifs - and sometimes they are so hard to let go of it's almost unreal. But we need to leave them behind - period.
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