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Windows are opaque and cloudy,
they match the world outside today.
Here to clean and inventory;
I share their mood, so dark and gray.
Decades worth of junk and clutter
fill this old and dusty shed--
shelves stuffed full of things collected;
phones still hang there, long since dead.
Up against the dirty window
sits a long forgotten bill;
what was once an oft-used number
is scratched down on the windowsill.
Several wrinkled, well-worn postcards
decorate the rough-hewn walls…
All the places never gone to--
work was where his duty called.
If I listen, still can hear him…
perhaps it’s just a bird outside.
Wish somehow that phone could reach him,
and I could say one last goodbye.
© Copyright Ginny Brannan June 2011
From the inside-out,
the inner poet escapes
needing to express
Humbly accepting the Perfect Poet Award Week #47, for my entry Week #46!
Very touching ending. Smooth flow throughout. Nicely done, Ginny
ReplyDeleteI like this very much. A word picture, quick portarit leading the subject to an emotional reaction to the memories being touched.
ReplyDeletewhat a creative craft.
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Very nice.
ReplyDeleteThe poignancy of the moment is conveyed strongly without being cloying.
Lovely!
ReplyDeleteI just wrote a piece myself about the 'Long Goodbye'
Thanks for sharing it with us.
Very poignant poem. Reminds me of when we cleared out my Grandparents' home when they had both passed away. It stilled my heart.
ReplyDeleteThe Lonely Recluse.
A really surprising, moving poem...I love how you change focus
ReplyDeleteThis is so touching and the ambiance is stunning
ReplyDeleteVery heartfelt.
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing.
Sharp, clear, touching, moving. Great job on the poem!
ReplyDeleteExcellent poem. Loved the imagery, the conclusion is touching and nicely done.
ReplyDeleteTouching and sentimental. Great imagery too. It's hard to forget about someone close that has passed away, but it's inevitable in life... Pick up the phone! Maybe you'll hear him...
ReplyDeletewonderfully written moving poem. I believe he can hear you :)
ReplyDeleteThat was sweet, Ginny, and read at the perfect time, too! I instantly thought of my late father and his beloved shed and tomorrow is Father's Day in Britain.
ReplyDeleteTouching and well written poem.
ReplyDeleteway to go.
ReplyDeletelovely!!!!! you deserved the award
ReplyDeleteWonderful piece! Makes me really, really miss my grandparents! Congratulations on the award! Well deserved!
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