Friday, February 2, 2018

Survivor












Invisible,  unseen—
each cut to the bone,
 each sin unatoned.
Faded, yet never gone…
hunting us… haunting us
surfacing like a stain
even when clouds disappear
 and days render clear.

Still, what is to be gained
     by complaining?

Each is dealt a specific hand
—if you are still in the game
     then you’re already winning.

© Ginny Brannan 2018

Photo: C. Parant Appetite for Photos Used with Permission.


Sharing at with Hedgewitch over at Verse Escape for Friday 55


8 comments:

  1. Yes, complaining changes nothing, except your mood and the mood of those around you(for the worse.) My husband often says, when a difficulty of getting old, etc, is mentioned 'Beats the alternative.' Great to see you at the 55, Ginny. Thanks for playing, and have a kickass weekend, like the G-man would want us to do.

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    1. My husband thinks like yours. One of his favorite quotes is from the movie Papillon: "Hey, you bastards, I'm still HERE!" Sometimes we need to remind ourselves. Thanks for letting me 'play!' And back atcha for that 'kick-ass weekend!!'

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  2. I guess you're right. There's a lot to be said for being on the "right side of the turf" as my dad used to say. I'm glad I had a hand in helping you find the Friday 55 too! :)

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  3. Yes, complaining is a monster I find on my tongue too often these days. I guess I am too comfortable with feeding it. :)

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  4. Yes, complaining seems to solve little, if anything. And the bones still grow older whichever path we choose, whatever hand we play.
    And I'm still winning... hopefully for a few more decades...
    Anna :o]

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  5. The last stanza made me squeal a few, Yes! Yes!! Yes!!! for that's what I tell myself every single day. Winning is nice, but we haven't lost while we are still playing.

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  6. I learned that once that you will always loose, winning is to be able to stay in the game as long as you can.

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  7. I like your play on words - not easy to keep it so tight in so few words, also love how this phrase sounds: 'surfacing like a stain'...

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Thank you for reading my poetry and sharing your thoughts.