From the inside-out, the inner poet escapes, needing to express....
mmm a slow burn is not a bad thing at all...and dont settle...just turn the gas up a bit...smiles.
!! Oh this is sizzling!
"your slow burn" smacks the right punch to end this poem. A beautiful piece, Ginny.
I dream of torrid..I think we all have those dreams..
I think the slow burn is so much more amazing than the quick burst of something that ends before it starts.
I dream of torrid as well but will wait for the slow burn ~ maybe it is meant to last longer ~
And thus goes married life--lots of fire in this one!
Torrid is fun while it lasts - slowburners just last longer :-)
The sizzle comes through, Ginny. Nice work.
All are good..fast and slow burn... This is a great read!
Nice! I love:dream of torrid; settle for tepid
Torrid, tepid, I suppose we get a little of both in this life... :) very nice!
Great!
Thank you for reading my poetry and sharing your thoughts.
mmm a slow burn is not a bad thing at all...and dont settle...just turn the gas up a bit...smiles.
ReplyDelete!! Oh this is sizzling!
ReplyDelete"your slow burn" smacks the right punch to end this poem. A beautiful piece, Ginny.
ReplyDeleteI dream of torrid..I think we all have those dreams..
ReplyDeleteI think the slow burn is so much more amazing than the quick burst of something that ends before it starts.
ReplyDeleteI dream of torrid as well but will wait for the slow burn ~ maybe it is meant to last longer ~
ReplyDeleteAnd thus goes married life--lots of fire in this one!
ReplyDeleteTorrid is fun while it lasts - slowburners just last longer :-)
ReplyDeleteThe sizzle comes through, Ginny. Nice work.
ReplyDeleteAll are good..fast and slow burn... This is a great read!
ReplyDeleteNice! I love:
ReplyDeletedream of torrid;
settle for tepid
Torrid, tepid, I suppose we get a little of both in this life... :) very nice!
ReplyDeleteGreat!
ReplyDelete