as sun slips ever lower in the west–
inside the quiet stillness old friends share
the kind that needs no plumage to impress,
each one of us relaxed in our own skin
not needing to break silence to express.
Maxfield Parrish clouds reflect the light,
their soft pastels are mirrored in the stream
incognizant of anything that’s passed
yesterday, today, the years between...
Who knew that such camaraderie would last?
It’s surely nothing any had foreseen.
Bright orange ball slips down behind the hills
that wrap this town inside their warm embrace.
On the street, the traffic holds its breath
as our footfalls metronome at faster pace....
the darkening sky a tense diaphragm,
while we say goodbye and go our separate ways.
It’s funny how some lives are interlaced,
transcending the confines of time and space.
© Ginny Brannan 2023
‘Traffic holding its breath,
Sky a tense diaphragm’
I did, sort of, though I split it. And I kind of paraphrased the first line. These lines were an afterthought, and it shows. But I gave it a shot. Oh, and exactly 144 words as required. Good practice!
Here is a link to the prompt at DVerse Poets Pub
*Image: Maxfiled Parrish print, Vermont Sunset at Ascutney (clouds reflecting on Connecticut River)
Very nicely done.
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DeleteSo nice to see you back, and there are more prompts coming up... we even have a live session per month where poets meet and read their poems and talk....
ReplyDeleteThanks, Björn. I will try to stop by more often!
DeleteWelcome back to the Poets’ Pub! I enjoyed the pace of your prose, Ginny, and the progress from gentle silence to the music of colour in the Maxfield Parrish clouds and the brash ‘bright orange ball’. I love the way the prompt line heralds a goodbye – although the words should stay in the same order with nothing inserted between them – except for punctuation.
ReplyDeleteWhen I read the poem you shared by Seamus Heaney, I was caught up in his rhyme scheme, andiron with it I did not notice until mine was complete that the requested that the line you chose should be used in our piece. Appreciate your kind words on the writing itself. Will do better, or at least follow directions, next time!
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