tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post8446081307442948781..comments2024-01-27T20:35:40.798-05:00Comments on Inside Out Poetry: Lead, Follow, or Get Out of the WayGinny Brannanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15298060016652737538noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-22969507540232885542013-08-30T23:18:38.929-04:002013-08-30T23:18:38.929-04:00Nice rhythm and rhyme to this one Ginny. And my f...Nice rhythm and rhyme to this one Ginny. And my favorite lines are your closing:<br /><br />It’s time to rev engine—to distance those fears—<br />and find that fine line where the road disappears.Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-59703740266889007612013-08-29T20:14:04.490-04:002013-08-29T20:14:04.490-04:00Well done. And thanks for sharingWell done. And thanks for sharingWaynehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14873809564739628512noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-50740193171009007362013-08-29T10:56:49.297-04:002013-08-29T10:56:49.297-04:00Used to be drivers weren't limited by on-ramps...Used to be drivers weren't limited by on-ramps and concrete. It takes a lot of extra revving to clear the road, and I find it here within your words.Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-27775932138763362632013-08-28T22:33:39.139-04:002013-08-28T22:33:39.139-04:00Wonderful to get beyond the horizon - very cool. ...Wonderful to get beyond the horizon - very cool. k. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-34872407422692749802013-08-28T19:56:18.291-04:002013-08-28T19:56:18.291-04:00Love the ending of this. A fine capture, Ginny.Love the ending of this. A fine capture, Ginny.ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-1085205976465705712013-08-28T14:06:24.282-04:002013-08-28T14:06:24.282-04:00That fine line where the road disappears...oh I lo...That fine line where the road disappears...oh I love that...Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-3861387382453254832013-08-28T03:47:11.225-04:002013-08-28T03:47:11.225-04:00I would agree: very effective. Leave those fears i...I would agree: very effective. Leave those fears in the dust. Great write, Ginny.Alex Dissinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01469434538735231477noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-44726406377440836852013-08-27T23:59:14.517-04:002013-08-27T23:59:14.517-04:00Great story to match the photo. Liked the form - v...Great story to match the photo. Liked the form - very effective.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-17375677507101358712013-08-27T22:28:45.381-04:002013-08-27T22:28:45.381-04:00fabulous!I love car revin poems. I love the last l... fabulous!I love car revin poems. I love the last line! I don't see fine lines either.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-47165752513351298592013-08-27T21:22:26.128-04:002013-08-27T21:22:26.128-04:00Sometimes you just gotta put the hammer down and b...Sometimes you just gotta put the hammer down and blast past them all! It's a good feeling, Cleaning out the carb, they used to call it. I call it cleaning out the soul! Nice write....<br /><br />http://johnallenrichter.wordpress.com/2013/06/21/the-night/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-31795143124679739232013-08-27T20:03:19.601-04:002013-08-27T20:03:19.601-04:00Brilliant! I don't use "Brilliant" l...Brilliant! I don't use "Brilliant" loosely here. That first phrase "Dragging in low gear..." sets the stage for the metaphor and analogous link to life. For a short prose piece it packs a big punch. LOVE IT! This is just too good my friend. Thanks for sharing it.emmett wheatfallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07466994239329611740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-26298532850061904712013-08-27T19:24:18.743-04:002013-08-27T19:24:18.743-04:00Sometimes it IS hard to focus on just what is ahea...Sometimes it IS hard to focus on just what is ahead! (And I too enjoyed your rhyme.)Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-24777534596004074722013-08-27T18:59:38.302-04:002013-08-27T18:59:38.302-04:00to find that fine line.... excellent, Ginny! (and...to find that fine line.... excellent, Ginny! (and I'm always in awe of your rhyme and meter)Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-12971765339209311112013-08-27T16:40:31.472-04:002013-08-27T16:40:31.472-04:00"that fine line where the road disappears&quo..."that fine line where the road disappears" - soon or late we all must get out of our way - nice writeAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-76139911237934735552013-08-27T14:46:10.640-04:002013-08-27T14:46:10.640-04:00Love this and especially the title! :-)Love this and especially the title! :-)Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-15365485097196371952013-08-27T14:15:35.251-04:002013-08-27T14:15:35.251-04:00Interesting interpretation - well done. :)Interesting interpretation - well done. :)Jinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-62577407429802340882013-08-27T14:06:20.819-04:002013-08-27T14:06:20.819-04:00Ginny, this is great!!!Ginny, this is great!!!Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-46018080307344334052013-08-27T12:22:08.306-04:002013-08-27T12:22:08.306-04:00ha - the title sums it up pretty well already... t...ha - the title sums it up pretty well already... there are times we just need to find our way esp. after having felt stuck for a whileClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-38247628922245952162013-08-27T12:19:12.910-04:002013-08-27T12:19:12.910-04:00oo la i like that last lines....sometimes we have ...oo la i like that last lines....sometimes we have to walk that fine line to get through the fears to the promise of that horizon....Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com