tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post812657746034058615..comments2024-01-27T20:35:40.798-05:00Comments on Inside Out Poetry: Cardboard MemoriesGinny Brannanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15298060016652737538noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-40441804119144801292011-09-26T16:39:38.582-04:002011-09-26T16:39:38.582-04:00Photos are wonderful at digging up old memories......Photos are wonderful at digging up old memories... and there's not cliche about one's life :-)e.a.s. demershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16009167844130542312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-68013782103096639172011-09-19T14:49:04.677-04:002011-09-19T14:49:04.677-04:00This is a lovely piece I enjoyed it very much :)This is a lovely piece I enjoyed it very much :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06195130371089856924noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-69648813023636646472011-09-18T12:25:03.887-04:002011-09-18T12:25:03.887-04:00a fond picture does trig lovely waves of memories....a fond picture does trig lovely waves of memories.<br />pleasant read.Pat-Mather Brown Gordon-ceton https://www.blogger.com/profile/08054955235497418740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-14716561913815344062011-09-17T20:12:14.201-04:002011-09-17T20:12:14.201-04:00lovely thoughts, lovely read :)lovely thoughts, lovely read :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-50019177249293706762011-09-16T23:56:07.010-04:002011-09-16T23:56:07.010-04:00Thanks to all who commented. Your thoughts are muc...Thanks to all who commented. Your thoughts are much appreciated. <br /><br />Shanna, Nothing to be "ashamed" about! I am not particularly good with children's poetry, and it's been a long time since I was reading children's stories to my son, so I went with the "photography" angle.I read a few pieces before posting, and saw that some went with different ideas taken from the prompt, like "photography." Actually had written this poem months back, but never "shared" until now.Ginny Brannanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15298060016652737538noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-4125239577472281122011-09-16T23:45:01.807-04:002011-09-16T23:45:01.807-04:00Lovely. I feel ashamed as I took the prompt quite ...Lovely. I feel ashamed as I took the prompt quite literally. I enjoyed it. Well done.renrenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17836973636702788365noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-28021826888016354562011-09-16T13:58:11.804-04:002011-09-16T13:58:11.804-04:00sweet.
thanks for sharing.sweet.<br />thanks for sharing.Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-70548156063602866352011-09-15T14:52:44.644-04:002011-09-15T14:52:44.644-04:00visual and lovely imagery.
way to go.
:)visual and lovely imagery.<br />way to go.<br /><br />:)Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05532576755186051550noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-19337902782038272622011-09-15T12:19:25.833-04:002011-09-15T12:19:25.833-04:00Your reflection has a smooth & flowing quality...Your reflection has a smooth & flowing quality that lends it a sense of authenticity !<br /><br />~MISH~<br />http://writer-in-transit.co.za/drama-ducksburg/Michelle Wallacehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02750092836481599870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-50215266972634717222011-09-15T06:32:19.337-04:002011-09-15T06:32:19.337-04:00Wonderufl poem. Very vivid and real feel to it. Ni...Wonderufl poem. Very vivid and real feel to it. Nicely done!<br />http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/09/14/what-about-the-cow-2/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-64501258696740630162011-04-22T11:30:45.893-04:002011-04-22T11:30:45.893-04:00Hi ginny. I love this poem and the way your repeti...Hi ginny. I love this poem and the way your repetition captures the inescapable image that has now engraved itself upon the speaker's mind. Thoughtful and evocative imagery. Thanks for sharing and good luck with your poetic adventure xxAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-31008447116849655882011-04-15T09:34:28.409-04:002011-04-15T09:34:28.409-04:00Nicely done! Not easy to do a villanelle (I believ...Nicely done! Not easy to do a villanelle (I believe that's what this one is?) Yours has a lovely flow to it and doesn't seem forced. Rolls like a song.Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-37241121315634504322011-04-11T09:48:30.465-04:002011-04-11T09:48:30.465-04:00What a pleasant poem! I remember last summer findi...What a pleasant poem! I remember last summer finding a box of old family photos, and feeling very much the same as you describe. I enjoyed the refraining line - it added well to the idea of memories. I can't place my finger on this form though. Villanelle?Mark Zellnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11300793283268983233noreply@blogger.com