tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post7869619905631721558..comments2024-01-27T20:35:40.798-05:00Comments on Inside Out Poetry: Unforeseen (Etheree)Ginny Brannanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15298060016652737538noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-15444588107842703092011-06-16T22:56:28.342-04:002011-06-16T22:56:28.342-04:00Very well done, I enjoyed this very much, thanks!Very well done, I enjoyed this very much, thanks!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-67260845991911879752011-06-16T08:30:28.686-04:002011-06-16T08:30:28.686-04:00Lovely poem, both in thought and form!Lovely poem, both in thought and form!Serena Shayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17959664736807639363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-12250638739329937192011-06-12T18:53:13.173-04:002011-06-12T18:53:13.173-04:00Sorry I'm late getting around. I too like the ...Sorry I'm late getting around. I too like the shape your poem took, visually as well as emotionally.Lihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08831231531918915804noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-39080708567457781382011-06-12T11:29:43.447-04:002011-06-12T11:29:43.447-04:00Eleven years ago our community was hit with a torn...Eleven years ago our community was hit with a tornado, your write just flowed with the memories - well done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-33006431206647610752011-06-12T11:17:01.216-04:002011-06-12T11:17:01.216-04:00Love the structure, flow, and descriptions in this...Love the structure, flow, and descriptions in this poem. I've been in a tornado in New Hampshire and near several tornadoes in Texas and I could relate to this poem. Great job!Judith C Evanshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09900422363643962837noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-23827106475998444072011-06-12T04:04:59.915-04:002011-06-12T04:04:59.915-04:00the shape of this poem makes it really unique! nic...the shape of this poem makes it really unique! nice!marithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05116189898401307852noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-38632778746214114152011-06-11T18:37:44.369-04:002011-06-11T18:37:44.369-04:00Awesome poem! Those were terrible storms that hit...Awesome poem! Those were terrible storms that hit Mass. Glad you were spared.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-61416208091932974642011-06-11T12:07:13.843-04:002011-06-11T12:07:13.843-04:00Shadow Poetry is a great resource for poetry forms...Shadow Poetry is a great resource for poetry forms. If you click on each type of poetry, it will explain it and give examples:<br />http://www.shadowpoetry.com/resources/wip/types.htmlGinny Brannanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15298060016652737538noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-47014422078687428202011-06-11T10:42:19.830-04:002011-06-11T10:42:19.830-04:00Thanks for the poetry lesson - it's my first t...Thanks for the poetry lesson - it's my first time encountering this type of poem , which is very interesting ! The shape and content perfectly describes this phenomenon - well done !<br /> Glad to know that you and your family were not harmed during this terrible ordeal ! <br />~MISH~<br />http://writer-in-transit.co.za/bluebell-sss-prompt-no-3-grey-stormy-moment/Michelle Wallacehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02750092836481599870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-68705739281425070792011-06-11T01:14:45.940-04:002011-06-11T01:14:45.940-04:00Happy to know that you and your family is safe.
y...Happy to know that you and your family is safe.<br /><br />your words describing the tornado sky is vivid and beautiful.Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-77488928544340966252011-06-10T00:53:18.678-04:002011-06-10T00:53:18.678-04:00Oh my I am glad you are well first of all! I love ...Oh my I am glad you are well first of all! I love the shape of the poem it looks like a tornado very clever. Such fantastic imagery, beautiful writtenAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-40451460391652941882011-06-09T12:23:12.862-04:002011-06-09T12:23:12.862-04:00A well crafted piece. I couldn't write anythin...A well crafted piece. I couldn't write anything like this (coming from UK where we don't have tornadoes) so mine is just a miserable rainy day. I like this, I'm glad you were spared :-Dandymac89https://www.blogger.com/profile/16504896361566138574noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-34413139166246046592011-06-08T23:17:48.704-04:002011-06-08T23:17:48.704-04:00I LOVE this.
Beautifully written, and the form is...I LOVE this.<br /><br />Beautifully written, and the form is divine. I am a freak for formal poetry. <br />Plus, being from Kansas, the subject manner sent chills through me. I'm glad you are all ok over there. I'll probably put something up on the story slam as well.<br /><br />Please consider me a follower. Just don't tell the poet. This pseudonym is supposed to be concentrating on fiction, and I don't want him boasting "I TOLD you that you would never be able to ignore your love of poetry!"<br /><br />Nice work. Very nice work.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com