tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post7538609330264025188..comments2024-01-27T20:35:40.798-05:00Comments on Inside Out Poetry: NuttersGinny Brannanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15298060016652737538noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-48244649347052905072012-09-20T14:53:35.359-04:002012-09-20T14:53:35.359-04:00These nutters drive my dogs insane! They sit on th...These nutters drive my dogs insane! They sit on the roof and chatter at the dogs below, taunting them from a safe perch. Many times, I've watched my Rhodesian Ridgeback attempt to climb the elm tree to reach the nutters.<br /><br />Love the repetition here. It enhances and focuses the write. Well done.Beth Winterhttp://eclipsingwinter.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-76256401780096801802012-09-19T20:03:10.791-04:002012-09-19T20:03:10.791-04:00I like how you've altered the second refrain a...I like how you've altered the second refrain at the end, it lend the piece a lot of development for a triolet. Neat pieceLuke Praterhttp://lukepraterswordsalad.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-5325096352770108262012-09-19T16:10:15.030-04:002012-09-19T16:10:15.030-04:00This is well done ~ I have noticed these squirrel...This is well done ~ I have noticed these squirrels too hoarding the food near our windows ~ Scarlethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03330793338813508704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-71000576951930946362012-09-19T08:17:46.929-04:002012-09-19T08:17:46.929-04:00Ginny,
You always make the forms so natural and o...Ginny,<br /><br />You always make the forms so natural and organic. You have a real intuition for this, making the writing seem easy, effortless--though I know it's not. Excellent piece, in meter, rhyme and seasonal context. I much enjoyed!Steve Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04818671944215117618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-14017027007514658752012-09-18T23:23:38.348-04:002012-09-18T23:23:38.348-04:00smiles...squirrels are so cute...always stops my b...smiles...squirrels are so cute...always stops my breath when i see one of them..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-14828621598248403322012-09-18T23:00:54.873-04:002012-09-18T23:00:54.873-04:00This is great :) My husband feeds them bread and p...This is great :) My husband feeds them bread and peanut butter from a spoon :)ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-10963034431905956542012-09-18T22:49:18.080-04:002012-09-18T22:49:18.080-04:00I saw several little guys scurrying around on my w...I saw several little guys scurrying around on my walk today. Now, I'm picturing how they must have been preparing :) Very cute.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01547380098561803645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-8774517231367329772012-09-18T22:41:14.522-04:002012-09-18T22:41:14.522-04:00Triolet really compliments their playful, skitty w...Triolet really compliments their playful, skitty ways.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-36989526752057117852012-09-18T22:04:43.540-04:002012-09-18T22:04:43.540-04:00This is great, Ginny. These little nutters (who ar...This is great, Ginny. These little nutters (who are incredible acrobats, by the way) are my morninng entertainment as I sit at the window with my coffee.PattiKenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02894925987580502697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-8115745125069528192012-09-18T17:28:18.323-04:002012-09-18T17:28:18.323-04:00ha i LOVE squirrels...they are my favorite playmat...ha i LOVE squirrels...they are my favorite playmates in nature...i could sit and watch them go at it all afternoon given half the chance...they are a trip...smiles.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-30738212724338728032012-09-18T17:14:21.714-04:002012-09-18T17:14:21.714-04:00Absolutely wonderful! Nutters, indeed!Absolutely wonderful! Nutters, indeed!Buddah Moskowitzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06839068145732552328noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-81947315306933268862012-09-18T10:09:09.022-04:002012-09-18T10:09:09.022-04:00Such fun with this one, Poet! A fantastic triolet....Such fun with this one, Poet! A fantastic triolet..a favorite form for me, so a double applause! I've near toasted by breakpads trying to avoid the scurrying little beasts here as well.Tashtoohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15847190224960829574noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-30241842308995370942012-09-16T19:49:20.648-04:002012-09-16T19:49:20.648-04:00Ginny, I like them so much. Nice poem, well craft...Ginny, I like them so much. Nice poem, well crafted.Lorna Cahallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12119513840378599480noreply@blogger.com