tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post6151068384452581163..comments2024-01-27T20:35:40.798-05:00Comments on Inside Out Poetry: Caught in Your DeadlightsGinny Brannanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15298060016652737538noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-24051601272591715992012-10-11T21:20:33.089-04:002012-10-11T21:20:33.089-04:00I like spiders but like your words more.
Anna :o]...I like spiders but like your words more.<br /><br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-32409287119493109832012-10-10T21:54:38.131-04:002012-10-10T21:54:38.131-04:00
hi Ginny
i hope you aer well . . .
The Brown Or...<br />hi Ginny<br /><br />i hope you aer well . . . <br />The Brown Orb Weaver (wow)<br />thats poetic in-itself <br />and i must use it sometime in a poem of my own - <br />what a fantastic name!<br /><br />i think you manage to deliver<br />a piece that has web-like meaning<br /><br />which makes for an appealing read<br />as we can all relate to one or other<br />interprtation . . . <br /><br />thank you for visiting zero summer<br />and for your kind words<br /><br />take care<br /><br />arron :)<br />Arron Shillinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17989854352644796752noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-71765863584038620422012-10-10T15:24:03.607-04:002012-10-10T15:24:03.607-04:00IT- one of the scariest films EVER...i love it. Th...IT- one of the scariest films EVER...i love it. This poem can be read in a few ways- you can take it literally as an eerie portrait of that arachnid....but i like thinking about this as description of SOMEONE....someone with those qualities...very cool Ginny Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-18272430423064583492012-10-10T07:44:24.424-04:002012-10-10T07:44:24.424-04:00The spider (charlotte) in the pig (wilbur) cartoon...The spider (charlotte) in the pig (wilbur) cartoon had that soft deadly side -- yet it is a children's poem. BrutalSabio Lantzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12963476276106907984noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-77612613655996215442012-10-09T23:59:48.011-04:002012-10-09T23:59:48.011-04:00The dual meaning, subtly shared, is not lost. Brie...The dual meaning, subtly shared, is not lost. Brief and direct, this piece feels full and complete. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-24394679943530864072012-10-09T21:57:16.918-04:002012-10-09T21:57:16.918-04:00Ginny, This is a fine piece, accompanied by a won...Ginny, This is a fine piece, accompanied by a wonderful photo...it's brilliantly distill, but has enough to show excellent development and balance. You've made this type of poetry your own and no one at dVerse does it better.Steve Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04818671944215117618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-74233593301898138502012-10-09T20:55:08.897-04:002012-10-09T20:55:08.897-04:00Wow, Ginny! First, I love the poems title--clever!...Wow, Ginny! First, I love the poems title--clever! Second, the picture took me by surprise--perfect! And then the poetic narrative, the contrasting metaphor about spun "lies" using a spider, that's digging deep poetically. Awesome!!emmett wheatfallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07466994239329611740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-24347292235051388392012-10-09T20:14:55.509-04:002012-10-09T20:14:55.509-04:00I really like this, Ginny. (And I love "deadl...I really like this, Ginny. (And I love "deadlights." Great word.) There's a grim inevitability to it, one that is unfortunately familiar.PattiKenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02894925987580502697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-63386619145503113862012-10-09T19:14:08.074-04:002012-10-09T19:14:08.074-04:00wow! never really thought about it till now.. liar...wow! never really thought about it till now.. liars ARE spiders! :DAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-77898809813091012072012-10-09T19:05:24.247-04:002012-10-09T19:05:24.247-04:00this is wonderful... i must admit that i kind of l...this is wonderful... i must admit that i kind of like spiders... great job with the eeriness of this.mrs mediocrityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01021079985184737831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-61886938972966300702012-10-09T18:06:24.909-04:002012-10-09T18:06:24.909-04:00People who easily craft lies are some of the most ...People who easily craft lies are some of the most frightening manipulators. Good job expressing the eerie skill involved :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01547380098561803645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-64173631808817304462012-10-09T17:23:44.706-04:002012-10-09T17:23:44.706-04:00shivers...a bit scary....we had a black widow on t...shivers...a bit scary....we had a black widow on the porch the other week that i had to move....yours though sounds a bit more intimate...and the lies we spin....Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-19868933283071964192012-10-08T08:07:21.103-04:002012-10-08T08:07:21.103-04:00Beautiful and sinister...and love the form! What ...Beautiful and sinister...and love the form! What a perfect metaphor. Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.com