tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post4887650964764536126..comments2024-01-27T20:35:40.798-05:00Comments on Inside Out Poetry: MirageGinny Brannanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15298060016652737538noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-72752824607742709702013-07-11T20:20:09.738-04:002013-07-11T20:20:09.738-04:00Beautiful. I agree with Steve. :)Beautiful. I agree with Steve. :)ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-54796044440124357962013-07-10T14:50:33.196-04:002013-07-10T14:50:33.196-04:00A fine rendition on desire/disappointment, illusio...A fine rendition on desire/disappointment, illusion/reality. Different from your usual posts, but equally artful and satisfying.Steve Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04818671944215117618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-56168103603088672512013-07-10T14:21:02.169-04:002013-07-10T14:21:02.169-04:00This is stunning, Ginny. I see the shimmer and fee...This is stunning, Ginny. I see the shimmer and feel the desire. Beautiful work as always. Wow...Beth Winterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00123202473118521429noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-19184681136792784412013-07-10T10:24:25.303-04:002013-07-10T10:24:25.303-04:00What a fine verse on the mirage that desire can be...What a fine verse on the mirage that desire can be. It unfolds before us, making us think we're thirsting for something we didn't even know existed ten minutes before, an illusion indeed. Fine imagery, good work!Waltermarkshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619428258264938946noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-74269555526862604972013-07-10T09:49:08.805-04:002013-07-10T09:49:08.805-04:00It makes me feel my separation from everything and...It makes me feel my separation from everything and the fact that everything is sort of illusion. 4% known and the rest dark energy. colleenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16669375650785054059noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-46170884411637245902013-07-10T02:09:21.952-04:002013-07-10T02:09:21.952-04:00...ah, hard when frustrations remained still as (o......ah, hard when frustrations remained still as (only) frustrations.. loved this Ginny... smiles...kelvin s.m.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02591849636814413110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-51371547070850919992013-07-09T23:47:35.273-04:002013-07-09T23:47:35.273-04:00Nice! Everyone can relate as there is always some...Nice! Everyone can relate as there is always something or someone that is out of reach. Smart of you to leave it undefined. Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-62988155766131121902013-07-09T22:57:37.014-04:002013-07-09T22:57:37.014-04:00You've caught the essence of mirage in nature ...You've caught the essence of mirage in nature and in life. Good one, Ginny.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-23774214546346163982013-07-09T22:36:30.255-04:002013-07-09T22:36:30.255-04:00I like the pair of heavy, hyphenated words joined ...I like the pair of heavy, hyphenated words joined by "prey" and the "-ing" words that follow implying continual movement, like the draggging of one's feet, and yet the final destination still elusive. And I love the visual aspect of the final descent just out of reach.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-83222221158415747932013-07-09T16:35:13.163-04:002013-07-09T16:35:13.163-04:00Beautiful Ginny--and filled with yearning--for ill...Beautiful Ginny--and filled with yearning--for illusions maybe?Audrey Howitt aka Divaloungerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06854425983822589062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-83040291972025557632013-07-09T16:30:56.410-04:002013-07-09T16:30:56.410-04:00oh those mirages - how they keep you wanting, &...oh those mirages - how they keep you wanting, & thinking you can have what you want<br />a beautifully written pieceAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-43356363401431044182013-07-09T16:13:46.304-04:002013-07-09T16:13:46.304-04:00Really enjoyed this, Ginny. It works well on so ma...Really enjoyed this, Ginny. It works well on so many levels, both as a literal description of the phenomenon and also as a metaphor for the things we desre but do not/cannot have.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-87703511371970950862013-07-09T15:47:32.513-04:002013-07-09T15:47:32.513-04:00I agree with Brian and Claudia... love this, Ginny...I agree with Brian and Claudia... love this, Ginny!Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-12294538285788628482013-07-09T15:47:31.123-04:002013-07-09T15:47:31.123-04:00wow. very vivid and resonating. love the way it un...wow. very vivid and resonating. love the way it unfolds and the conclusion. truly poetic :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-50136347638483001742013-07-09T14:34:01.551-04:002013-07-09T14:34:01.551-04:00oy...mirages are mean... always playing with the m...oy...mirages are mean... always playing with the mind and never being able to reach...ouch...that stings...Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-51828810761619851122013-07-07T11:06:46.361-04:002013-07-07T11:06:46.361-04:00its that last drawn out line that brings this all ...its that last drawn out line that brings this all together for me...and really brings on the emotion...of wanting yet never being able to reach...and how unsettling that is...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com