tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post1418925755978954281..comments2024-01-27T20:35:40.798-05:00Comments on Inside Out Poetry: Yet Love RemainsGinny Brannanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15298060016652737538noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-76901975711520089302013-05-30T17:44:18.545-04:002013-05-30T17:44:18.545-04:00The story of love here is positively inspiring and...The story of love here is positively inspiring and beautiful. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-19378568772718110562013-05-29T14:48:24.251-04:002013-05-29T14:48:24.251-04:00Ginny, this is absolutely breathtaking. Not only i...Ginny, this is absolutely breathtaking. Not only is it a wonderful tribute to a lucky man, it is beautifully written. The link between the cabeza and your glosa is seamless; almost as though both had been written by the same poet.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-5466784087506493612013-05-29T14:17:48.128-04:002013-05-29T14:17:48.128-04:00Tender, beautiful and melancholic...lovely poem, G...Tender, beautiful and melancholic...lovely poem, Ginny, and written in such a challenging form. Great job! :)Louisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18216734722467789412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-49683064806253816262013-05-29T08:04:31.097-04:002013-05-29T08:04:31.097-04:00Wonderful job... very challenging; this style of p...Wonderful job... very challenging; this style of poetry, and you superbly mastered it! :) <br /><br />PennyAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15750392266956265554noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-36199720532037582182013-05-29T06:43:49.941-04:002013-05-29T06:43:49.941-04:00The feel and style of the quatrain echo perfectly ...The feel and style of the quatrain echo perfectly throughout the rest of your fine composition. Very nice job on this, I enjoyed it much!!!!Steve Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04818671944215117618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-69380502662120970602013-05-29T00:00:08.803-04:002013-05-29T00:00:08.803-04:00Ginny, I read this earlier today and left a commen...Ginny, I read this earlier today and left a comment on FB. For some reason, my cell phone doesn't always let me comment blogs. <br /><br />Tender and beautiful. I planned to try my hand at this form but life had other plans for me. You met the challenge wonderfully.Beth Winterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00123202473118521429noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-91531683574884358942013-05-28T22:11:54.413-04:002013-05-28T22:11:54.413-04:00So gorgeous, Ginny. I just love it... especially y...So gorgeous, Ginny. I just love it... especially your second stanza.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-10446424214243606792013-05-28T21:42:38.558-04:002013-05-28T21:42:38.558-04:00This was beautifully written and hopeful of the gr...This was beautifully written and hopeful of the graying future steeped in memory. Thank you for sharing.Shawnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12089160847429622347noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-56185323713795860192013-05-28T21:31:40.300-04:002013-05-28T21:31:40.300-04:00Ginny, this is so well done. You worked your poem...Ginny, this is so well done. You worked your poem perfectly around the Yeats quote. The glosa flowed so very naturally and spoke to anyone 'of a certain age.'Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-13065980254675665042013-05-28T21:22:26.062-04:002013-05-28T21:22:26.062-04:00What a lovely glosa Ginny ~ There is grace and st...What a lovely glosa Ginny ~ There is grace and strength in the long journey of love ~ That quote you selected is beautiful as well ~ Thanks for the evening treat ~Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-51126660070995610372013-05-28T19:46:48.542-04:002013-05-28T19:46:48.542-04:00smiles...wonderful to see you tonight mrs ginny......smiles...wonderful to see you tonight mrs ginny...smiles.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-20567914298772801202013-05-28T19:37:05.311-04:002013-05-28T19:37:05.311-04:00Beautiful and tender write!Beautiful and tender write!Audrey Howitt aka Divaloungerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06854425983822589062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-89045439720704029422013-05-28T17:59:25.456-04:002013-05-28T17:59:25.456-04:00This is so beautiful and you have done such a marv...This is so beautiful and you have done such a marvelous job with the form.Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-3976203131194564172013-05-27T21:10:26.131-04:002013-05-27T21:10:26.131-04:00Between not feeling well for a few weeks, and the ...Between not feeling well for a few weeks, and the crazy hours I have been working,it really has been a while. Good to catch up with you too, Victoria :-)Ginny Brannanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15298060016652737538noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-66292175054746328892013-05-27T12:53:15.329-04:002013-05-27T12:53:15.329-04:00Ginny, this is so perfectly written...I can see wh...Ginny, this is so perfectly written...I can see why you made it late to Form for All, but I'm so glad you did it. I often end up linking my prompt responses to OLN for that very reason. It's good to see you. It seems like it's been a while.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-46836985923222982452013-05-27T00:22:46.375-04:002013-05-27T00:22:46.375-04:00Thank you for your kind words, Sam. And also appre...Thank you for your kind words, Sam. And also appreciated your expertise on the rhyme. Thank you for teaching and inspiring us with your Form For All. So glad you enjoyed my poem.Ginny Brannanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15298060016652737538noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-46799906498311931822013-05-27T00:05:34.897-04:002013-05-27T00:05:34.897-04:00I love that poem from W.B. Yeats that you mined fo...I love that poem from W.B. Yeats that you mined for the cabeza, and so the rest of the poem unfurled for me like a wondrous dream from that kernel. The beauty of this glosa is that the theme parallels the cabeza so closely, it feels like your souls have travelled through time and are the reincarnation of Yeats and his love.<br /><br />About that fourth stanza and the rhyme you had a question about? I use slant rhymes all the time, and there's no reason to change what, here, works well. And by works well I mean: your glosa transported me to a different place, and I thank you.Semaphorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16945917520773585129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-67050848887555354822013-05-26T23:12:17.402-04:002013-05-26T23:12:17.402-04:00This is just lovely Ginny. What a beautiful senti...This is just lovely Ginny. What a beautiful sentiment, beautifully expressed.Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-53153997285427740502013-05-26T19:56:29.078-04:002013-05-26T19:56:29.078-04:00Beautiful love poem..sweet and gentle. :)Beautiful love poem..sweet and gentle. :)ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-55255514726787992772013-05-26T13:27:16.415-04:002013-05-26T13:27:16.415-04:00i like the gentleness of your verse...and you work...i like the gentleness of your verse...and you work the form well...nothing jumping out at me right away to play with that rhyme in S4, if it comes i will let you know though..i hope my love ages well...it does become different but still it lives...smiles.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com