tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post1306624080057306579..comments2024-01-27T20:35:40.798-05:00Comments on Inside Out Poetry: Finding The MelodyGinny Brannanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15298060016652737538noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-52001706692642262142013-07-28T23:24:48.724-04:002013-07-28T23:24:48.724-04:00great movement through the seasons and time - exce...great movement through the seasons and time - excellent writeAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15220312888756354357noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-43130449219639927862013-07-27T01:55:28.685-04:002013-07-27T01:55:28.685-04:00speak to us of life forloaning deathspeak to us of life forloaning deathKatie Mia Frederickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01336627766755378406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-30850991723501725812013-07-26T00:12:29.367-04:002013-07-26T00:12:29.367-04:00a nice capture of the seasons and how they weave i...a nice capture of the seasons and how they weave in and out of our lives and carry their soul into ours...each with their special beautyClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-70124910789751728582013-07-25T23:21:06.245-04:002013-07-25T23:21:06.245-04:00great symbolic stances in e poem along with a beau...great symbolic stances in e poem along with a beautiful imagery and wonderful writing.. :-)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-62041811094947897752013-07-25T22:36:21.638-04:002013-07-25T22:36:21.638-04:00Just beautiful, Ginny. You have captured EACH sea...Just beautiful, Ginny. You have captured EACH season so well.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-31953627526479633682013-07-25T21:27:33.665-04:002013-07-25T21:27:33.665-04:00I always wanted to be a Palladin, but settled for ...I always wanted to be a Palladin, but settled for being an ex-actor, teacher, dreamer, and poet. Your journey, your lists are all inclusive; a mini-epic of language; smartly written & paced; liked several lines /those dew-cast morns where eagles soar/,<br />/we soak up knowledge from rock and roll/, & /and sings the tune without the words/, like kissing without lips, touching without fingers, seeing while stone blind; a spirited ride for all of us; thanks. Glenn Buttkushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10680725814199700692noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-27236253635742248392013-07-25T21:09:37.837-04:002013-07-25T21:09:37.837-04:00'chill that seeks out brittle bones' -- my...'chill that seeks out brittle bones' -- my sentiment exactly today, and so funny, I had considered using 'brittle' in my piece today but to no avail..glad it got some good use :) peace, JasonAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-91228273549955089402013-07-25T20:51:44.275-04:002013-07-25T20:51:44.275-04:00Very much enjoyed this, what a lovely form and as ...Very much enjoyed this, what a lovely form and as has been said just flawless...beautifulAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-15865195084503126012013-07-25T20:19:03.778-04:002013-07-25T20:19:03.778-04:00ha i remember this one from the other day and did ...ha i remember this one from the other day and did not notice then but it fits perfect....this time i want sand castles, knights and pirates...as it makes me think of the beach...smiles.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-2562382610736749662013-07-25T20:18:04.689-04:002013-07-25T20:18:04.689-04:00Ginny, I have to say you are the queen of form. I ...Ginny, I have to say you are the queen of form. I like working in it but it almost always seems forced to me whereas yours just dances flawlessly. Lovely use of the Glosa, the list prompt and repetition is starting each stanza with:"Speak to us of..." I really like that technique.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-39350644896097647252013-07-25T20:00:11.354-04:002013-07-25T20:00:11.354-04:00A lovely glosa, I must try this form again ~
Th...A lovely glosa, I must try this form again ~ <br /><br />The quote from Emily is exquisite and your seasonal progression is very creative ~ Though winter will chill our bones, may we never forget the hope and youthful step inside us ~ Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02213172239590722747noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-45118584205493960302013-07-15T08:08:20.043-04:002013-07-15T08:08:20.043-04:00Ginny this is so elegant. It goes beautifully wit...Ginny this is so elegant. It goes beautifully with the ED quote. and kudos on the form! Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-18925423973298721032013-07-14T16:03:52.391-04:002013-07-14T16:03:52.391-04:00Thanks, Brian! :-)Thanks, Brian! :-)Ginny Brannanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15298060016652737538noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-64214375972115031552013-07-14T15:47:10.372-04:002013-07-14T15:47:10.372-04:00smiles...cool step through the seasons, in nature ...smiles...cool step through the seasons, in nature and life...i rather like spring in your words for all its fantasy...autumn for its comfort...each season as with each age brings its own joys...and trails...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com