tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post8212740811444191539..comments2024-01-27T20:35:40.798-05:00Comments on Inside Out Poetry: Shadow of DoubtGinny Brannanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15298060016652737538noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-61167953985155190732012-09-05T15:55:52.808-04:002012-09-05T15:55:52.808-04:00Ok, I was so caught up in this poem that I did not...Ok, I was so caught up in this poem that I did not even catch that it was a sestina until you mentioned it at the bottom.... Which is the earmark of an excellent form poem! But, don't get a big head yet.... cuz you are a pretty good looking gal talking about kissing and I'm a guy.... In context it's really not that hard to blow our attention spans!!!! :) All in all great poem though, few sestinas get by me without recognizing the form! And Claudia is spot-on... very intimate, very lovely...... enjoyable read....John Allen Richterhttp://johnallenrichter.wordpress.com/2012/08/24/edge-of-unspoken-dream/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-90055981477395647612012-09-05T13:13:52.307-04:002012-09-05T13:13:52.307-04:00love the intimacy in this ...tender and beautiful....love the intimacy in this ...tender and beautiful...and hopefully that promise didn't lie...Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-90135483183167893262012-09-05T12:13:36.535-04:002012-09-05T12:13:36.535-04:00Ginny,
Outstanding work within the confines of the...Ginny,<br />Outstanding work within the confines of the form...it's so hard to make these interesting, given the very few word ends you''re allowed. That is so seamless and effortless, and the metaphors/comparisons are so apt! Very nice job. SKSteve Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04818671944215117618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-5581112742704680052012-09-05T03:36:28.119-04:002012-09-05T03:36:28.119-04:00I'm not familiar with the form but the poem is...I'm not familiar with the form but the poem is lovely..."entwined with you, upon my neck a kiss" ...sigh...so romantic :)Louisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18216734722467789412noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-8716605654357865002012-09-04T22:23:23.646-04:002012-09-04T22:23:23.646-04:00Well done on the tritina , have not tackled that o...Well done on the tritina , have not tackled that one yet. Good transition from the promise of the night to the questions of the morningAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-17991591753990797242012-09-04T19:54:20.950-04:002012-09-04T19:54:20.950-04:00The dark can hold such promises but in the day thi...The dark can hold such promises but in the day things seem more clear, hopefully the promises are still there.Pat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-51599617288351434622012-09-04T19:22:44.426-04:002012-09-04T19:22:44.426-04:00Fixed that Brian, only one now (was afraid if I de...Fixed that Brian, only one now (was afraid if I deleted one I'd lose both, but thankfully didn't happen!) Thanks for stopping by again my friend, always good to hear from you!Ginny Brannanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15298060016652737538noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-65300094415785832202012-09-04T19:07:08.987-04:002012-09-04T19:07:08.987-04:00This is a beautiful write Ginny--I am not familiar...This is a beautiful write Ginny--I am not familiar enough with the form to comment on that--Audrey Howitt aka Divaloungerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06854425983822589062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-78108820794667314672012-09-04T18:19:20.471-04:002012-09-04T18:19:20.471-04:00Oh, I do hope the promise didn't lie. That wou...Oh, I do hope the promise didn't lie. That would cut to the quick. Beautiful imagery in this Ginny.Daydreamertoohttp://daydreamertoo.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-67212281589332958592012-09-04T18:12:44.200-04:002012-09-04T18:12:44.200-04:00love the intimacy in this as well ginny....gee i w...love the intimacy in this as well ginny....gee i was so excited i posted the first comment twice...smiles....hope you are well...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-31208374298802951902012-09-03T00:56:50.937-04:002012-09-03T00:56:50.937-04:00did your kiss lie? :( doesn't the song go &q...did your kiss lie? :( doesn't the song go "it's in his kiss. that's what it is?"zongrikhttp://zongrik.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-60037141179511960162012-09-01T20:18:24.895-04:002012-09-01T20:18:24.895-04:00Just stunning, Ginny. Doesn't it seem like thi...Just stunning, Ginny. Doesn't it seem like this form lends itself to sensuality? But then, so does the sestina which is one of my favorite forms, albeit challenging. Enjoyed this, Ginny...but I always do enjoy your work.Victoriahttp://liv2write2day.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-75046798304022457572012-09-01T08:30:58.187-04:002012-09-01T08:30:58.187-04:00So beautiful, Ginny... I especially like the secon...So beautiful, Ginny... I especially like the second stanza.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-70506045792742741072012-09-01T01:17:03.327-04:002012-09-01T01:17:03.327-04:00An inspiration to link each verse with a different...An inspiration to link each verse with a different time of day - dusk, night, dawn - and to embody the sun, the moon, the sky, with meaning at the periphery of the emotions you are evoking. Semaphorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16945917520773585129noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-40619870265876753182012-08-31T23:11:41.144-04:002012-08-31T23:11:41.144-04:00oh i hope not...easy to make promises in the dark ...oh i hope not...easy to make promises in the dark esp once the heat is going...smiles...nice progression in this from days end to something much more personalBrian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com