tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post8176201985013926035..comments2024-01-27T20:35:40.798-05:00Comments on Inside Out Poetry: Ticking ClockGinny Brannanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15298060016652737538noreply@blogger.comBlogger32125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-15824034292235982872013-10-11T14:02:20.047-04:002013-10-11T14:02:20.047-04:00This is lovely, Ginny.This is lovely, Ginny.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16308322887557661274noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-47701488335876968832013-10-10T04:20:20.167-04:002013-10-10T04:20:20.167-04:00Beautifully expressed.Beautifully expressed.Sue Jhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15864986500627496240noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-62291012800645469382013-10-10T02:58:22.014-04:002013-10-10T02:58:22.014-04:00Superb write Ginny. And I do so wish I could slow...Superb write Ginny. And I do so wish I could slow down the passage of time...<br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-43609129811128233322013-10-09T01:58:06.104-04:002013-10-09T01:58:06.104-04:00"Yet in the end, we all will be out-cast, as ..."Yet in the end, we all will be out-cast, as each of us return to dust and bone." Oh how I hope you are wrong about that.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16349087080262856079noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-45418027381820717502013-10-08T03:06:34.510-04:002013-10-08T03:06:34.510-04:00I worry about this too, I think many people feel t...I worry about this too, I think many people feel this way powerful words and great use of repetition Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-70460285488140602942013-10-07T19:28:04.262-04:002013-10-07T19:28:04.262-04:00It really is gone too fast...It really is gone too fast...Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-3303400618299146352013-10-07T13:38:52.575-04:002013-10-07T13:38:52.575-04:00Right on and well-crafted!
=)Right on and well-crafted!<br /><br />=)Susan Andersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16049586085703324088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-37703859144155215872013-10-07T12:39:57.951-04:002013-10-07T12:39:57.951-04:00Great poem, Ginny. As one of those 'twilighte...Great poem, Ginny. As one of those 'twilighters' I can appreciate how fast the clock ticks. Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-46225705749496559352013-10-07T04:26:38.811-04:002013-10-07T04:26:38.811-04:00flows like a beautiful song:) lovelyflows like a beautiful song:) lovelyVandana Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10270400982093787158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-39532841445723495642013-10-06T18:37:56.674-04:002013-10-06T18:37:56.674-04:00I enjoyed this.
Time does fly.I enjoyed this.<br /><br />Time does fly.Gailhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04219479223227928561noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-28634594360651395872013-10-06T13:59:10.074-04:002013-10-06T13:59:10.074-04:00A favorite of mine, too. Time really does go by so...A favorite of mine, too. Time really does go by so fast, and I think as we get older, we realize that more and more.Laurie Kolphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07494759781947881343noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-59455198657172728212011-12-07T20:49:31.836-05:002011-12-07T20:49:31.836-05:00Nice one.... well done! :-)Nice one.... well done! :-)e.a.s. demershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16009167844130542312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-10345262221813334382011-11-26T22:10:23.794-05:002011-11-26T22:10:23.794-05:00Wonderful. Common topic, uniquely done!!
WilliamWonderful. Common topic, uniquely done!!<br />WilliamAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-5249533802621681602011-11-26T12:26:22.164-05:002011-11-26T12:26:22.164-05:00Beautifully crafted--thanks for sharing!Beautifully crafted--thanks for sharing!Guilie Castillohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09006999087139126972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-33559682251050820572011-11-25T23:00:36.687-05:002011-11-25T23:00:36.687-05:00insightful and beautiful.
:)insightful and beautiful.<br /><br />:)Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05532576755186051550noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-33494145594201988922011-11-25T09:13:46.528-05:002011-11-25T09:13:46.528-05:00This poem deals so well with that concern we all h...This poem deals so well with that concern we all have. Maybe someone just turns that timer upside down and we start again...somewhere else.<br /><br />JamieAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-4025846498429728752011-11-25T06:07:51.418-05:002011-11-25T06:07:51.418-05:00I remember reading this one before...don't kno...I remember reading this one before...don't know if I commented already or not but anyway it is still a timely piece.Charlie Paranthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06684221320439752073noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-75012677317737421502011-11-24T11:36:09.868-05:002011-11-24T11:36:09.868-05:00I'd like to think that I'll return as the ...I'd like to think that I'll return as the sand in someone else's hourglass.A delightful piece.<br /><br />http://keithsramblings.blogspot.com/2011/11/hourglass.htmlKeith's Ramblingshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13564578491652021492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-56366539015556098352011-11-24T11:02:02.840-05:002011-11-24T11:02:02.840-05:00I hear the time walk in your words.
fantastic tho...I hear the time walk in your words.<br /><br />fantastic thoughts,<br />you rock.<br /><br />Happy Thanksgiving.Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-23051837788910138012011-11-24T10:28:08.126-05:002011-11-24T10:28:08.126-05:00time flies,
true words.
well done.time flies,<br /><br /><br />true words.<br />well done.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-46236065046878519712011-11-23T17:44:10.314-05:002011-11-23T17:44:10.314-05:00So true, Ginny. I sometimes try to recall the time...So true, Ginny. I sometimes try to recall the time between then and now, and it seems it was mere moments ago. Very nice write!<br /><br />http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/11/23/the-last-grain-of-sand/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-23975299294402287602011-08-03T23:32:10.753-04:002011-08-03T23:32:10.753-04:00I've reached an age (okay, I reached it years ...I've reached an age (okay, I reached it years ago) where the passage of time has begun to carve grooves into my life up to my eyeballs. So deep that sometimes I can't see life and appreciate it for what it is and should be. Your poem was a ladder out of that groove. Thanks, Ginny.Joseph Heschhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13217169295029029233noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-28668886155076824842011-08-03T17:18:28.427-04:002011-08-03T17:18:28.427-04:00Oh, yes. I remember this, Ginny. A perfect Villane...Oh, yes. I remember this, Ginny. A perfect Villanelle. So glad you linked it to dVerse. VictoriaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-75662528320772194742011-08-03T07:33:25.809-04:002011-08-03T07:33:25.809-04:00Great villanelle Ginny, the favourite of the old f...Great villanelle Ginny, the favourite of the old forms.<br /><br />Yet in the end, we all will be out-cast,<br />as each of us return to dust and bone. - how true.<br /><br />CaysAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-62138903487058964342011-08-02T23:54:44.827-04:002011-08-02T23:54:44.827-04:00I love the villanelle form, and yours has really u...I love the villanelle form, and yours has really utilized the repeating lines well--they're simple and seemingly straightforward, but they catch at the brain for a bit of deeper attention. Enjoyed it much.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.com