tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post8125367519881969275..comments2024-01-27T20:35:40.798-05:00Comments on Inside Out Poetry: DeceptionGinny Brannanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15298060016652737538noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-70779431144350143622014-10-17T08:47:20.172-04:002014-10-17T08:47:20.172-04:00lovely write... so gently donelovely write... so gently doneWolfsrosebudhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17295258422523621134noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-39649056695775218142014-09-14T11:45:35.141-04:002014-09-14T11:45:35.141-04:00…and a warning would have done no good. …and a warning would have done no good. Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-68817000800019102332014-09-11T02:16:25.071-04:002014-09-11T02:16:25.071-04:00I like this immensely. Love and Light, SI like this immensely. Love and Light, SAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-30859927244778399532014-09-10T14:56:05.254-04:002014-09-10T14:56:05.254-04:00Oh nice rhyme pattern...Oh nice rhyme pattern...Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-56282902071201669792014-09-10T02:25:35.350-04:002014-09-10T02:25:35.350-04:00oh yes this is fantastic!!oh yes this is fantastic!!Kayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16584116146098939783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-17468343631916115232014-09-09T23:40:49.551-04:002014-09-09T23:40:49.551-04:00excellent rhythm excellent rhythm Michaelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18164471310146247950noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-56168177623996301112014-09-09T19:18:20.024-04:002014-09-09T19:18:20.024-04:00I think you captured the light that lures us and t...I think you captured the light that lures us and the darkness that settles after the shine. This was really well done.Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-3878287173228117612014-09-09T14:55:17.275-04:002014-09-09T14:55:17.275-04:00Beautifully done Ginny. Form, word choice, everyt...Beautifully done Ginny. Form, word choice, everything is perfect.Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-23885103806870438882014-09-09T11:13:51.077-04:002014-09-09T11:13:51.077-04:00Yes, things are not always as they seem....wise wo...Yes, things are not always as they seem....wise words Ginny. :-)Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-56831999750481531382014-09-09T08:20:08.608-04:002014-09-09T08:20:08.608-04:00You've distilled this painful dynamic so wonde...You've distilled this painful dynamic so wonderfully in your eight lines. Very fine job, Ginny. Steve Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04818671944215117618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-51927741540587420122014-09-09T05:25:36.115-04:002014-09-09T05:25:36.115-04:00Pleasantly enticing; well done.Pleasantly enticing; well done.Berownehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09524661173663604641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-86655527162168628672014-09-08T23:22:39.206-04:002014-09-08T23:22:39.206-04:00all that glitters is not gold!!...lovely rhythm......all that glitters is not gold!!...lovely rhythm...Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-90033087696729869562014-09-08T20:39:15.716-04:002014-09-08T20:39:15.716-04:00Love the rhythm of your rhyme here. Love the rhythm of your rhyme here. De Jacksonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04798544585779003567noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-88309639486264240542014-09-08T18:29:49.881-04:002014-09-08T18:29:49.881-04:00Oh yes, be safe from harm's way, indeed!Oh yes, be safe from harm's way, indeed!21 Witshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00071361755673253230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-46654495823033412014-09-08T14:02:12.647-04:002014-09-08T14:02:12.647-04:00How sad but well written. We often leap before we...How sad but well written. We often leap before we leap but maybe the flames will help us remember the lesson.<br /><br />Brilliant.Gailhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04219479223227928561noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-46933890732655618962014-09-08T12:39:24.417-04:002014-09-08T12:39:24.417-04:00Ah yes, beware the light ...Ah yes, beware the light ...Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.com