tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post6599840539395364962..comments2024-01-27T20:35:40.798-05:00Comments on Inside Out Poetry: Broken UmbrellaGinny Brannanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15298060016652737538noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-69133343025976858132011-09-03T23:22:52.193-04:002011-09-03T23:22:52.193-04:00"Personal hurricane" is such a powerful ..."Personal hurricane" is such a powerful notion.Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-28774242380353091182011-09-02T04:57:31.021-04:002011-09-02T04:57:31.021-04:00Great stuff brilliantly done.
Anna :o]Great stuff brilliantly done.<br /><br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-38067392754825884772011-08-31T12:46:49.131-04:002011-08-31T12:46:49.131-04:00The 'erosion' is in the words and the form...The 'erosion' is in the words and the form.<br /><br />The hurt is everywhere. Your piece put it there. <br /><br />So much feeling so poignantly expressed, so well done.<br /><br />Cheers<br /><br />(I wish you happier times.)Jeffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12823532229269308280noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-89869505996730461162011-08-31T04:32:26.016-04:002011-08-31T04:32:26.016-04:00Clever. Topical. And rounded off with a brilliant ...Clever. Topical. And rounded off with a brilliant image.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-8325784843201818322011-08-31T02:08:24.471-04:002011-08-31T02:08:24.471-04:00A well written account of unhappiness in free vers...A well written account of unhappiness in free verse form. Keep it up!Lucy Westenrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12787225228788303013noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-28827618877654692052011-08-30T22:14:30.684-04:002011-08-30T22:14:30.684-04:00very intense and I am happy you shared thisvery intense and I am happy you shared thisAnn LeFlorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09421100825301270608noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-74810548539735150092011-08-30T21:34:46.519-04:002011-08-30T21:34:46.519-04:00smart words...
lovely magpie.smart words...<br />lovely magpie.Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05532576755186051550noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-20671205125853291782011-08-30T20:32:32.345-04:002011-08-30T20:32:32.345-04:00Yes, it is always the hurricane within that brings...Yes, it is always the hurricane within that brings the deepest damage. <br /><br />Awesome choices of words in this. I like berm. Always liked that word!Jannie Funsterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11595786402510366043noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-57817772600658819562011-08-30T20:25:42.525-04:002011-08-30T20:25:42.525-04:00Beautiful read. As I am going through this hurrica...Beautiful read. As I am going through this hurricane myself, I can say that if it wasn't for poetry, I wouldn't have been able to withstand the violent winds and storm surges. Thanks for the power of your words.Virginia Roberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05218422913028849395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-8827448850635040132011-08-30T19:36:41.812-04:002011-08-30T19:36:41.812-04:00You picked great imagery to portray the inner mess...You picked great imagery to portray the inner message. It's an emotional piece that avoids being trite. The ancient story made new again. An enjoyable read.Steve Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04818671944215117618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-36439357797521029642011-08-30T18:56:42.432-04:002011-08-30T18:56:42.432-04:00whew...i have stood in these storms...when there s...whew...i have stood in these storms...when there seems no safe ground...and like a hurricane you find there are moments and you are only in the eye...a powerful evocative piece..Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-37564690670870300872011-08-30T18:44:35.150-04:002011-08-30T18:44:35.150-04:00Wow very intense piece, when the umbrella breaks i...Wow very intense piece, when the umbrella breaks it seems to break good and lets everything come crashing down.Pat Hatthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07745293224202430152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-14261388875058112872011-08-30T11:38:27.845-04:002011-08-30T11:38:27.845-04:00Wow! Powerful! "floating debris of the once ...Wow! Powerful! "floating debris of the once solid pier that was us" Both of my girls are going through divorce now. Your words speak the pain they are going through.Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.com