tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post2509457185301519707..comments2024-01-27T20:35:40.798-05:00Comments on Inside Out Poetry: Hand in HandGinny Brannanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15298060016652737538noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-40764055522350720052013-01-30T10:47:25.603-05:002013-01-30T10:47:25.603-05:00Beautiful tender words - a pleasure to read.
Anna...Beautiful tender words - a pleasure to read.<br /><br />Anna :o]hyperCRYPTICalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11967085628384237933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-75657654573642460712013-01-26T15:19:56.800-05:002013-01-26T15:19:56.800-05:00I think I've commented before about how writin...I think I've commented before about how writing to a form takes a special kind of discipline, but really pays off. I like to do it myself from time to time as a challenge. Here you meet the challenge head-on and it works perfectly Ginny.Little Nellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11862657943846727987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-47267533338297467832013-01-25T18:04:13.701-05:002013-01-25T18:04:13.701-05:00So many wonderful lines in the Ginny!! :-)So many wonderful lines in the Ginny!! :-)Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-22131390889196839912013-01-25T09:38:17.256-05:002013-01-25T09:38:17.256-05:00Beautiful in form and content. I love that first c...Beautiful in form and content. I love that first clasp.Beth Winterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00123202473118521429noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-34484824342710661042013-01-24T15:28:27.982-05:002013-01-24T15:28:27.982-05:00So very lovely read out loud...So very lovely read out loud...Tess Kincaidhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04889725786678984293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-78706521128468200862013-01-24T00:08:37.324-05:002013-01-24T00:08:37.324-05:00Ah - you handle the form so fluidly - it is lovely...Ah - you handle the form so fluidly - it is lovely - like the fingers caressing the hand. k.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-49884660536883112942013-01-23T14:56:05.362-05:002013-01-23T14:56:05.362-05:00Free Verse (sort of ) Ha! You are a master at r...Free Verse (sort of ) Ha! You are a master at rhyme and rhythm - And such a sweet verse this is.... "you whisper faintly in my ear in language only love translates." Thank you for your kind comments on my blog. (I love reading about Lincoln and found this website interesting - I added it to my post after you commented : http://www.lincolnportrait.com/index.html <br /><br />I've been so busy with family lately, I've had little time to blog... I think I will use an old one for Magpie Tales this week. Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-55695762272903514532013-01-23T14:06:58.914-05:002013-01-23T14:06:58.914-05:00I found this very touching (pun intended).
"...I found this very touching (pun intended). <br /><br />"Then quickened heart anticipates<br />through promises conveyed, unspoken;<br />and sharing secrets once repressed,<br />you whisper faintly in my ear<br />in language only love translates."<br /><br />Those lines spoke to me. Nice write, Ginny.Alex Dissinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01469434538735231477noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-80033369222542852282013-01-23T07:38:35.399-05:002013-01-23T07:38:35.399-05:00Ginny, your poetry always impresses me. This is no...Ginny, your poetry always impresses me. This is not least because, whilst you have maintained a consistent rhythm, which doesn't falter, and, in the case of this poem, a complex rhyme scheme as well, you yet convey a flowing continuity, which is as easy as a soft flowing stream to sit and watch and follow. As Claudia says above, this is also soft and gentle and very warming to the heart.poetjanstiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366592443925617507noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-67302652354296931142013-01-23T01:16:12.943-05:002013-01-23T01:16:12.943-05:00love the intimacy and gentleness in this...walking...love the intimacy and gentleness in this...walking through life hand in hand...a good thing...Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-6278776217653008922013-01-22T23:27:17.782-05:002013-01-22T23:27:17.782-05:00:o) - Still lovin' this one!:o) - Still lovin' this one!Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-66489849743674433912013-01-22T21:35:05.370-05:002013-01-22T21:35:05.370-05:00Love this, Ginny. Beautiful !Love this, Ginny. Beautiful !ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-73316894428330385322013-01-22T18:24:04.737-05:002013-01-22T18:24:04.737-05:00ah true that...touch is very evocative....ah true that...touch is very evocative....Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-5433712731627952092013-01-22T16:09:41.891-05:002013-01-22T16:09:41.891-05:00Weaved wonderfully for me, Ginny!♥Weaved wonderfully for me, Ginny!♥Helenahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13447013188405986054noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-62263781844129288802013-01-22T16:01:37.390-05:002013-01-22T16:01:37.390-05:00Forever friends, I can tell, from this day forth.Forever friends, I can tell, from this day forth.21 Witshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00071361755673253230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-87181343231200472972013-01-22T08:49:47.465-05:002013-01-22T08:49:47.465-05:00Nicely done, Ginny. I love how you keep trying new...Nicely done, Ginny. I love how you keep trying new forms to express your thoughts.<br />Charlie Paranthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06684221320439752073noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-80147325274712628832013-01-22T08:42:50.100-05:002013-01-22T08:42:50.100-05:00Oh Ginny! Wow! I especially love the lines, '...Oh Ginny! Wow! I especially love the lines, 'you whisper faintly in my ear/ in language only love translates' and the closing lines, 'then palm to palm, your touch palpates to kindle fire, hand in hand.' Kudos!Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-25326104196504302932013-01-22T05:23:49.246-05:002013-01-22T05:23:49.246-05:00Skillful, ingenious - and wise.Skillful, ingenious - and wise.Berownehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09524661173663604641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-16990017126331497342013-01-21T22:27:16.730-05:002013-01-21T22:27:16.730-05:00Thanks Brian, I think holding hands is a very sedu...Thanks Brian, I think holding hands is a very seductive thing, a prelude of deeper intimacies to come.Ginny Brannanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15298060016652737538noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-56812452165313215882013-01-21T22:15:10.941-05:002013-01-21T22:15:10.941-05:00your touch palpates to kindle fire....i like that....your touch palpates to kindle fire....i like that...of course the kindle fire has its own meaning...ha....but i took it literally...cool job on the form...there is a nice soft intimacy in this...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com