tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post1145071010028558670..comments2024-01-27T20:35:40.798-05:00Comments on Inside Out Poetry: Weighted DownGinny Brannanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15298060016652737538noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-62122039471766958372011-05-23T18:08:48.351-04:002011-05-23T18:08:48.351-04:00Hi Ginny, great poem! I loved the form! I am par...Hi Ginny, great poem! I loved the form! I am partial to poetry that repeats a line or the same words through out. Used well, this technique draws all the verse together nicely and really brings home the meaning of the piece. And you have certainly used it well! Loved this poem.Suburban Farmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02970891728128569513noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-72909570334302984752011-05-23T09:42:39.922-04:002011-05-23T09:42:39.922-04:00The repetition of that one line really made the po...The repetition of that one line really made the poem, added a sense of weightedness to it. Enjoyed it!Elizabeth Johnsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00681448814813694801noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-72085270212816726772011-05-22T19:27:12.056-04:002011-05-22T19:27:12.056-04:00What a great little poem - inspired, not by the ba...What a great little poem - inspired, not by the balloons, but by the state they are in - desire - desire for what they were meant to be, and only ropes stop them. I loved this. Nice work!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-69396952168380304072011-05-21T18:54:04.591-04:002011-05-21T18:54:04.591-04:00beautiful, you rocked on it.
bless your weekend.beautiful, you rocked on it.<br /><br />bless your weekend.Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-37905298363798125442011-05-21T13:16:01.233-04:002011-05-21T13:16:01.233-04:00Thought-provoking take on the prompt. I really enj...Thought-provoking take on the prompt. I really enjoyed the easy flow of the meter and rhyme as well as the effective use of repetition.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-89854938910946368972011-05-21T06:06:37.391-04:002011-05-21T06:06:37.391-04:00love this and relate to this poem...many a time i ...love this and relate to this poem...many a time i found myself chained down like this but sometimes one must play wizard !Kalahari blueshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14559343115750745384noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-79698532531279990202011-05-21T01:13:38.594-04:002011-05-21T01:13:38.594-04:00hi ginny,my first time here..
i really liked your ...hi ginny,my first time here..<br />i really liked your poem:))<br />enjoyed it:)<br />thanks for sharingtarunimahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00924642457573448209noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-79133032329021808682011-05-20T12:20:50.748-04:002011-05-20T12:20:50.748-04:00Hi Ginny, I loved the form you have chosen here, a...Hi Ginny, I loved the form you have chosen here, and you have written the tale quite nicely. I wrote a 55 fiction for the same image :) <br /><br />P.S: There is a box, first widget, right sidebar at my blog! Enter your e-mail ID there, and you'll get updates when I publish :)<br />or you can also add http://leonnyes.wordpress.com to your dashboard reader, there is an add button there :)<br /><br />Thanks for liking my poetry!Vinay Leo R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13132856855570330824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-71667560298545580952011-05-20T08:14:42.187-04:002011-05-20T08:14:42.187-04:00Lovely style, great use of repetition, great take ...Lovely style, great use of repetition, great take on the promptAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-40788996940200608042011-05-19T23:41:51.872-04:002011-05-19T23:41:51.872-04:00oh, i felt this one. no, the explanations for our ...oh, i felt this one. no, the explanations for our weights are not always simple, but perhaps we can learn to fly (or at least cut the ropes) sooner than later :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01547380098561803645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-79025051178093236792011-05-19T22:41:14.649-04:002011-05-19T22:41:14.649-04:00I'm really liking the quatern form. It moves t...I'm really liking the quatern form. It moves the poem along nicely.Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-17856765752127422622011-05-19T15:34:15.247-04:002011-05-19T15:34:15.247-04:00Interesting poetry form ! I noticed that the refra...Interesting poetry form ! I noticed that the refrain is positioned differently in each stanza ... very effective in re-inforcing the idea of being heavy & burdened !<br />~MICHELLE~<br />http://writer-in-transit.co.za/bluebell-sss-prompt-no-1/Michelle Wallacehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02750092836481599870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3884360193624478106.post-74459697670973578452011-05-19T11:20:34.291-04:002011-05-19T11:20:34.291-04:00you make the hot air balloon ride very exciting he...you make the hot air balloon ride very exciting here,<br />love your contribution.<br /><br />Happy Thursday.<br />:)Bluebell Books Twitter Clubhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02346482636849975765noreply@blogger.com