From the inside-out, the inner poet escapes, needing to express....
mmm a slow burn is not a bad thing at all...and dont settle...just turn the gas up a bit...smiles.
!! Oh this is sizzling!
"your slow burn" smacks the right punch to end this poem. A beautiful piece, Ginny.
I dream of torrid..I think we all have those dreams..
I think the slow burn is so much more amazing than the quick burst of something that ends before it starts.
I dream of torrid as well but will wait for the slow burn ~ maybe it is meant to last longer ~
And thus goes married life--lots of fire in this one!
Torrid is fun while it lasts - slowburners just last longer :-)
The sizzle comes through, Ginny. Nice work.
All are good..fast and slow burn... This is a great read!
Nice! I love:dream of torrid; settle for tepid
Torrid, tepid, I suppose we get a little of both in this life... :) very nice!
Thank you for reading my poetry and sharing your thoughts.