From the inside-out, the inner poet escapes, needing to express....
Sad, but beautiful.
It sort of drips loneliness and despair. Beautifully done in so few words.
uh huh....ha...i have a feeling he will be hurrying to get there...smiles.
I am with Brian on this one Ginny....:-)
Yes, I feel there will be some haste in his return. :)
Ha - maybe more than half-wanton - only one half shows! Ha. Great rhythms here. k.
I agree with Cosmo - beautifully done indeed.Anna :o]
sad, n lovely. excellent take.
Short and sweet and the passion is tangible Ginny, this is gorgeous!
She is definitely half and half, like creamy, yummy coffee ... he is on his way!!
Perfect interpretation of the image. Short, enticing.
great job getting to the point!!
Thank you for reading my poetry and sharing your thoughts.